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Old 01-13-2008, 11:05 AM   #13 (permalink)
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I thought i wuld rent his flow, before i get to the harmin...
but i'd rather indent his skull...then use any part of a margin
^nameplay needs work. and wtf@RENT his flow? im sure you forced
that to rhyme w/indent his skull. indent/margin could've been better.

i'm plenty obnoxious, n i think the feelins obscure...
kinda how he smokes blunts on poles...cept he leaves with a sore!!
^no

Kids wack as fuck, n his raps are an actual loop...
of how the steelers did last week...comin back to lose
^as is,no.

culd be black as brew, but he still can't tell men from woman
he's the reason...there's baby's born with stigmatism's!!
^his color affects his ability to determine a sex? no.

check out this warmin, cuz well i yearn for the pussy...
takin bong hits in the mornins...only time he's hittin it early
^didnt even rhyme. but so far,this was your best and its so weak/played lol

i'm rippin this herb please, n you kno he needs help...
if he has to finish every verse...with a vote for himself!!
^any proof? that'll turn this from filler into a good personal.

He's a tired emcee, who doesn't use much of a punch...
everytime he pauses...that's wut downsyndrome does
^no

His dome is made of mud, n sorry to bring up the past...
but the only thing prophets are good for...is kickin up sand!!
^his dome is made of mud......no and no to follow-up.

as married to the block, but got kicked outta his place an shit
with an impending divorce, due to the long distance relationship
^no

Writing is awful, I sure hope ya voice is tighter....
ive never felt wack before this battle, and might i recommend moisturizer
^wtf@lotion having to do w/battling?

each one of my punches hit hard with spoken precision
your verse is just the annoying lines at the top - like a broken television
^eh,im being generous on this one.

you but cant find better matches, the surrender is timeless
so polished at backing up...
his hard drive doesnt crash, no matter the virus
^back up reference? setup could've been better and the follow-up.
iuno...this was decent at best. could've worked it w/o crash/virus.

to find a girl that supports your music must be the best dude
i knew love was blind, but clearly it's deaf too
^concept was good,but you killed it lol. could've took the couplet of the match
w/this one if you worked it out right. i liked this concept here,but its so under-developed.

horrible battle IMO. i'd have to say prophet took this one though.
out of all the lines i gave credit,it seems he tried harder than Constant.
alot of times both were making no sense in general,but P's lines had more to them.

again,both kinda sucked,but he sucked less.
^alot of those kinda battles lately,wtf?
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