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shoulda took the no show win and ran off laughing ..
Tek - a fairly 'by the numbers' kinda piece .. you mentioned the beat but I don't know that track and really can't be bothered to search for it to check the flow .. but for a text piece .. the flow was pretty straight anyway .. the read however was rather plain .. I felt no empathy or sympathy toward the content and characters of the piece .. the aspects of the writing were just marginally above average .. lacking in imagery or any spark or flare .. just a pretty ordinary text verse with very little personality .. and to say you labelled it as a personal piece and the concept to which the content is geared .. it's kinda disappointing to have had no effect from reading it ..
GL? - what's your sudden fascination with this bi-polar shit? .. lol .. and no surprises I guess that we're back to people dying .. making up for last week with 3 getting the GL? treatment this week .. the story was nothing great at all .. I wouldn't call it standard or ordinary .. as who the fuck has 3 wives living under the same roof and kills them? .. apart from the odd muslim and maybe a dark secret of Hugh Hefner .. this said .. I did find it quite entertaining as the read was steady with a simple structure of describing each wife and situations in seperate verses .. it worked and I never felt off put or distracted from the plot .. unimaginative and uncreative .. unimpressive even .. but ..
Vote = Got Life? .. "but .." it was more entertaining than Tek's piece .. now with the content put forward by Tek I'm sure he isn't looking to 'entertain' the reader as such .. but I never felt involved or remotely gripped to Tek's piece .. it really had little emotional value that I was expecting from reading his introduction to it .. GL? just trood on safe ground with his standard formula of death and murder .. but the read was more appealling in terms of the mechanics as well as the material ..
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