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[ IV|Q's Championship Review ]

I have very mixed feelings about this match as it definately did not meet my expectations.

Firstly, while I did enjoy reading Bonnie's story simply because of the personality that she conveyed through her writing, I also felt while reading it that she had absolutely no chance to win the title unless Tekneek registered as many aliases as Baron Mynd and voted for her multiple times solely because of the fact that he could picture her rapping it which by the way I thought was an actual negative aspect being the numerous amount of asteriks and footnotes and X2's as if while reading you would really times a line by two unless it was typed twice. Either way it never really took anything from her verse but overall the substance I thought just couldn't compare to what I assumed either Pent or Nah would deliver. Also the flow was only 75% on point from a reader's standpoint, but I would have loved to hear the song.

Secondly, Poetickz aka Pent Up went on a rampage about God know's what only to deliver a semi decent topical that was overshadowed by both pieces. The idea was actually a good one and the majority of the read was enjoyable but the flow was long winded and stretched out of this world which lessoned the impact. Also the ending and some other lines were far fetched but some things again brought back memories. The execution just failed here mechanically being the flow and the actually way that you conveyed the plot. Decent script overall.

Thirdly, Nah Son delivered the most mechanically sound of the three as well as the best solidly written story. Nothing outstanding here as he just stuck to the script and delivered a rapidly progressing yet somewhat gripping plot accompanied by shorter bars and good enough flow to push the reader through to an ending that was said to be quoteable by some. The tie in to the picture at the end was excellent and the overall story was enjoyable. My only beef would be that the first picture was not needed and the second picture should have been pushed further to the bottom so as not to ruin the ending. Either way it all worked and the story's quick progression actually worked for the better here.

Clearly Nah had the better piece and any vote otherwise was ludicrous. The other two writer's were a toss up but I believe after re-reading I might place Bonnie in second. Even so, pretty good match up here but Nah prevails to take on myself in the most anticipated Champ match of the year.

Good Luck homie.

At this moment, I still haven't even thought of an idea to write about. Too much on my plate. But I intend to give you a good run for your money so don't sleep.