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Ok um, this one ended up being sort of tough for me to figure out.
Vote = DIC
I think DIC edged out just about every aspect of this here other than humor, which I suppose is a little ironic. Overall, Valium's piece was funny, but it quite superficial in terms of the storyline. It kept unravelling, which was sort of cool, but as I read it, I didn't really feel like I was being led anywhere in particular. I don't know if that makes shit for sense. It doesn't really help that I'm not really into pieces dealing with dicks and balls and what not lol. Just a personal preference thing. DIC's was borderline dealing with the same struggle. I was reading it thinking, where in the hell is this going, but at least there was the larger social commentary thing going on to hold it together somewhat. I don't know, neither of these were awesome, but DIC's rhyming was a notch above Valium, flow was a little more consistent, and it seemed a bit more serious, which is more to my liking. Not to mention something else, Valium, but I won't go there lol.
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