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My buddy(My best try to be poetic)
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05-08-2005, 11:25 AM
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Birks
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Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Northern land
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^ I agree..as a rap not bad at all...
I see the attempt made though and can pick out pieces that are more poetic..
This was def from the heart though don't get me wrong...
Cool flow and feel.
Stay writing..
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