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I'm gonna go with seyance taking this one. Doy I liked reading your verse, it was straight, reminded me of some movies I seen in the past. Especially like your use of multis, they was in abundance and I thought it was good, just seemed like to me it was taking a while to lead up to its conclusion, plus I wish there would of been more with the fight then just two punches. Sey yours was good with the imagery and everything, flowed well, not as good as Doys tho. the story was pretty cool, creative and twisted. it was movin in a quick way and that helped the development.
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