View Single Post
Old 04-27-2005, 07:55 PM   #2 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts
MysteryOfUntoldTruth
 
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Bay Area,Cali
Posts: 1,962
MisterEThoughts takes it up the butt!
Interesting piece.. Would this poem be about you? if so this is deep if not still deep... I like the imagery.. I felt it i felt that i was there observing this when this was going on... Real nice... I don't know about this being simplistic... i thought this was pretty deep... I guess it matters how you look at it....
__________________
complicated visionary....injected beauty...
provided by the starry night of misery...
http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464
My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"
MisterEThoughts is offline   Reply With Quote