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yeah I love the alliteration....hidden repitation....painted a nice picture and makes me wonder if there was another hidden meaning in this poem...a deeper message...I sometimes do that in my poems?
the title kinda caught me off guard...that MILF?...lol...what are you doing....how old are you
the poem started out great but to be honest with you it seemed to fall apart towards the end...and didnt have that same instensity it started with....that zigzag organized abstractness
but still overall impressive piece
keep doing your thing Madnick/LtGH whatever you call yourself these days...lol
love is love
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The Truth isn't out there because its already landed and the Truth is:
JESUS CHRIST
Oddie Sloan
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