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Old 04-27-2005, 10:26 AM   #3 (permalink)
UFO the Phoenix
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UFO the Phoenix takes it up the butt!
Koban returns just when we need him most!!!!!!!

love this poem yo....simple and heartfelt....in and out right to the point.....the lil storys in this were shocking and disturbing....someone being bully on a website decides to comment suicide thats crazy??!?!?...but the sad this is I can understand that

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man this poem was powerful...and you had a nice cadence flow to it...the wordplay was str8.....I love the fact we need to build each other up instead of breaking each other down....I need that right now in my life...to refocus on whats most important

"enslaved by material goal"

^thats says it all right there

gotta let it go....give it up.....let go let GOD

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