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Old 04-23-2005, 11:08 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Allah. takes it up the butt!
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stop the lying and frontin, shit aint helpin you whore
purfeksion? look at ya record
its sad when u cant be true ta yoself anymore
hmmm this was aight, didnt hit hard though, but aight....and Im sure similiar concepts have been thrown at him before but its freshy fresh to me

my punchs connect cable fast, not to brag when i mention it
while pur's broadband,is just him and some girls with instruments
i put this in the mag, so you know i like this

with the way you cook up them lines, yo it shows doubts
cuz son you could use a fresh batch and I do NOT mean Toll House
ehhhh not feeling this

and yea you a grimey kid, hygiene is baffilin me
cuz im building up a rep here, yur just building up plaque on your teeth
ok i guess

plus he's fallin a few steps behind, so watch now
as he tries to get in the swing of things and avoid bein knocked out
decent, kinda plain though man

race to get the hoes? he lost but came within inches
cuz the last bitch to holler at you..well, yo moms did warn u bout them dishes
bla @ this

you aint gon win this shit, fuck havin hope for dude
but i did just see demik in hookups
got somethin in exchange for votes for you?
I know the history about demik AIming for votes but I aint feeling this man

im gon kill him, you gotta die after shit this good
cuz your Eternal Path's south...when u see her, try not to get wood.
bla bla bla bla, bad closer

purfeksion

I don't need to try, I can see that u're worse...
Beat u like I'm writing the Bible, one line can equal a verse
LOL @ this, nice

I got u open all day, like the doors at Wal-Mart...
Give u an out of body experience, n' knock u out the Ball Park
not feeling this, seen too many out of body experience lines

Coz' I'll crack u with a baseball bat without any haste...
ya head catch so many contacts, it'll get chain letters everyday
hmmmm ok

A lot of personals in this league are due to u...
'Coz u're the one everybody gets dissed for losing to
lol, ok personal

Peep the mag. My noshow verse was the worst, it's true...
And it's a shame...'coz I should've saved that verse for u
bla, kinda decent but i unno man i wanna see some fire

He's got bad plaque, so he's never smilin' to us...
So much film on his teeth, Kodak had to design his toothbrush
lol, you know i like this too i put it in the mag, shake-zula

Dirty nicca...u think u'll be droppin my rank?
Don't hold ya breath, matter of fact, here's an oxygen tank
hmmm not really feeling this

I don't mean to brag, but I'm the best...with ease...
Eyedill took away half my wins...and u still have less than me
lol, word, cool shit

hotdog - decent verse, inconsistant a few lines i wasnt feeling, i dunno dude, i guess you rushed this, but word....I expected better

purfektion - inconsistant verse too, but I liked some of your punches more than hotdog's and I liked your punches more than his, but this was kinda close.

overall - both coulda done better from what Ive seen in the past, but I liked pur's film line and dog's broadband line, and pur's film line was better, and besides that pur was more consistant....decent shit guys

vote - purfektion
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