Thread: The Demons on the inside ( my first real vent thru poerty )
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Old 04-02-2005, 07:30 PM   #7 (permalink)
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This poem had a nice calm feeling to it for it to be a vent. Seem like it was more thought out than something put out there randomly or whatever. But I liked the point you were trying to get across. Though it's old, I think it's one of your better pieces. Keep it up


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