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Old 02-09-2005, 01:30 PM   #12 (permalink)
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hmm....honestly i thought the piece was sort of week for u..the ending really grabbed my attention but outside of that it felt like i was just reading a poem....stupid as that sounds..lol...i like the picture the poem and to be able to realeate..i just couldnt see this one man

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