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i liekd the whole piece, but maybe that was just me.... the way you set it up in the begining it kind of delved into my curiousity... I liked thebegining... Anyways the flow was on point, your words meshed together wonderfully and it was enjoyable to flow with them... the ending was the s trongest part of the piece, it was ended well
Stay Up, much love, peace
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And I sat watching a flower
As it was withering
I was embarrassed by its honesty
So I'd prefer to be remembered as a smiling face
Not this fucking wreck
That's taken its place
get some balls biatch or else
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