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shadows edge · 10-13-2004, 12:53 AM

v. smoka

not a great verse, the nameplay in the first bar was nice enough to take this though... excel you focused too much on multis, and all your punches are pretty played, weak and worded akwardly.

10-13-2004, 12:53 AM	#6 (permalink)
shadows edge Red Sox, bitch Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Urbana, IL Posts: 1,014	v. smoka not a great verse, the nameplay in the first bar was nice enough to take this though... excel you focused too much on multis, and all your punches are pretty played, weak and worded akwardly.