[Awedishin]

Knowing a thought of her would forever control his ligaments

wtf? lol....that's a little bit of a stretch

anyways

Kaybi, overall my impression was it's ok, but nothing spectacular...there's some lines in there that are suspect like the one above. Forcing things just to make the rhyme flow isn't a good idea usually. I think that was poor word choice, honestly. Anyways....like said, decent, but I think you even did better last week

CK - pretty cool, I liked the scheme and flow, the imagery was coo....the different parts played a cool role...this verse was good, nothing amazing from you, but very solid and enough to win

vote CK