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Old 10-10-2004, 12:38 AM   #17 (permalink)
Kaybi
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Great match good reads from both.

MC4Sight = Tight, flow was perfect, not a syllable off. Definitely props on that. The story was nice, a chronicle of thoughts sort of. I was feelin it, the structure was ill, and vocab was there. The only thing is the end left me feelin a little empty. The very end. Thats just me tho. Overall really good work, enjoyable in all aspects.

Reulen Reactus = Tight verse, done truly in story/song format, which is cool with me. Told a story from start to finish. Story itself was strong, and carried curiosity to the end, no flaws in that. Flow was good, off a couple times but it didn't hurt you. Some metaphors were a little plain and maybe common, kinda like the "cum" wordplay in battling. I felt this tho, good finisher as well

Vote MC4