[Cereal_Killer]

MC:
That was f-en awesome, your wording was perfect, I sometimes frown upon your style until mid way when I get pulled into the rythem and then I just flow with it. What I really like about this is that you can read it fast it’s just one continues stream. Story wise great, look the tittle itself tells it all, brilliant ideas, nice structure, all round good piece.

9.2/10

RR:
This was it’s own little cool thing ok. It wasn’t mind blowing but it was alright. Flow was good, story ok, wording not too bad, it was all just sort of a normal everyday story. Nothing bad but nothing standoutish

6/10

Vote = MC4sight