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Cereal_Killer · 10-09-2004, 10:26 PM

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As far as a rap story/topical verse goes I actually thought it didn’t suit, but just as a normal piece this was written so beautifully. I think it was very out of the norm style wise, which I kinda liked because you where willing to take the gamble. The best thing about the verse is the subtle way you delivered it, for a dark story it really seemed pleasant. Nice piece.

7.6/10

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I actually really liked your piece, for a key anyways. It had a few iffy parts to it but in a whole this was a pretty tight piece. Ending nailed it, just the wording on how you delivered the final surprise I liked. Good job

5.5/10

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10-09-2004, 10:26 PM	#12 (permalink)
Cereal_Killer California Cornflakes Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a tub of gutter glitter Posts: 3,181	Inf: As far as a rap story/topical verse goes I actually thought it didn’t suit, but just as a normal piece this was written so beautifully. I think it was very out of the norm style wise, which I kinda liked because you where willing to take the gamble. The best thing about the verse is the subtle way you delivered it, for a dark story it really seemed pleasant. Nice piece. 7.6/10 At: I actually really liked your piece, for a key anyways. It had a few iffy parts to it but in a whole this was a pretty tight piece. Ending nailed it, just the wording on how you delivered the final surprise I liked. Good job 5.5/10 Vote = infinite truth __________________ :·.·: cocaine, genius, insomnia :·.·: .·.cereal killer . got life . inf truth.·. .. You're not likely to see a green CK Unless you've got a ticket with MDA ..