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Tek what didn't you get about the ending? He slept with his boss
Atreyu, that was pretty cool for a quick one...I think you missed some big time gaps, but the ending was cool....you've gotten a lot better. Now if you only actually put time in, you'd be doing excellent
Inf, amazing verse, very brilliant scheme and flow, the imagery was awesome....raw storytelling with a touch of poetic genius. You keep droppin hot ones and you'll be one of the faves in this thing man.
vote = Inf
good luck y'all
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