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I agree pretty much with what ED LAKe and NAVARA stated.
4sight
you got a knack in really colorizing words and showing metaphors in a very descipritive way.. im personally trin to evolve mine in that way 2 but to correlate it into a more defined direction.... although u showed this illustrative display throughout... it still gives a deeper understanding of how u patternize and eloquently have it done... i dont know... that part jus does enoughto mystify me
rr
this wasnt bad at all... u just need to polish ur whole structure in whole and like what talent said... just need to find a direction and a purpose to what ur telling us about..... basically 4sight just glitered with more overwhelming exhibits of each element he used..
4sight = 92
RR = 84
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