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man I had a long ass breakdown typed out at work and the network went down, I'll edit my vote later
anyways
vote = 4Sight
Retulen put up a brilliant effort, very nice little story, don't remember the last time you dropped an RSTL piece this nice. Nothing incredible, but you covered the basics for the most part and you had a nice flow and scheme. Word choice was weird in some spots, and the ending wasn't all that solid IMO, but still good effort.
4Sight, you never cease to amaze me. I really liked this one, could be one of my favorite verses from you. You've really got that scheme and flow down, and I hope you don't change it after it took me a while to pick it up lol. this piece was full of little things that made the imagery stand out, and you had brilliant word choice throughout. Great story
good luck y'all
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Last edited by Mac Flow; 10-09-2004 at 01:21 PM.
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