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CK-this was a very interesting verse to me the style you wrote it in was nice. i like how you ended it off with those short lines it added a nice effect to the ending. the story was nice and clear, and your flow was on too. it was a well written verse and the imagery was nice but in the end i'll be honest i wasn't left like wow, or overall that amazed by it. it was just an average verse nothing stood out that much to me ya know. still it was good and all, just not ya best.

Kaybi-this was a well written verse too, yuor imagery and overall description really stood out, the only thing that sort of bothered me is the end-rhymes. they all seemed to be these big words that ryhme at the end of each line, there wasn't much for the flow to work with inbetween if ya know what i'm saying, and sometimes lines didn't transition as smooth as they could of. still the overall content and writing won it for you it was just a more content driven peice.

Good match here guys. Good Luck To Both

Vote-Kaybi