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MC4Sight:
it's amazing how you write such similar verses every week, and yet they are all so different...you're very good at that...you're just a great writer...stream of conciousness with an abstract twist...very deliberate storytelling...slow moving and beautified...with a lot of deeper meaning...a lot of social commentary in your verses...this is actually one of the best i've read from you...really great verse.
Retulen Reactus:
that's not a twist...no offense, but that ending wasn't really well setup at all...no foreshadowing and no difference in understanding...Skull flipped out a gay twist properly, you didn't...however, it was a very good verse...very well written...the lyricism and flow were nice and you pulled off the love verse without making it too corny...good job.
vote=MC4Sight
just on another level
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