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CK, that was just fucking tight. the imagery painted so much and gave a clear picture of waht was going on in Adams mind. and I like your second topic, the first topic was cool for foundation though. very poetical and to the point. I liked that too. nice all the way through
Kaybi, never heard of you, but this was a well rounded piece all the way. the flow was good, the story was tight with great details and colorful vocab as well as imagery. the details and colorful scapes throughout the story put this a lil above Ck's piece
Vote Kaybi
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