[Edward Lake]

Damn, I feel bad for RR here.

RR: you didn't come bad, twist was good, you had some nice lines..

Your my god,
i built a church in my chest for your heart to worship
but if loving you is a sin then curse it

But your piece didn't portray the emotion I expected to see. Also your wording was off at times. Plus you had the disadvantage of going against one of the best pieces 4Sight ever wrote.

MC4SIGHT: Classic shit homie. This is Inf Truth type material. I was loving it. Your descriptions were sick, imagery was off the fucking hook, I could quote so many things. Cadence, vowels, everything was in perfect harmony, let me quote some shit.

But she’s busty, she’s slim, she’s sexy, she’s the in…
And I’m in, eclipsed by the sin she perspires. She never tires.
She wears men on her necklace and drags them on her ankle bracelet…
And though we teenagers, her dangers are adulterous…
She’s pestilence and I’m her latest test to it. She’s blessing me.
Kiss. Kiss. She captures my pecks with her lips, lips.
I trip, trip, her tongue is acid, her mouth speed. I’m fast spinning.
Spin, spin. I twist, she twists, together we wisk over another.

This is worded so perfectly...I don't think ANY writer in the league could have done this better..it was written so beautifully and complex, yet so concise..
This piece shows you're up there with the Talent's, Inf Truth's etc. if you want to.

vote = MC4Sightp, amazing verse.