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A.S.K:
Man that’s some weird shit dude. I’m serious. At first I was huge fan of this, it just ran so smoothly then once the inner voice came in, it sort of came across a bit to simplistic. Just the way your lines where structured seemed as if you didn’t put as much effort as you could of with it. The end was still cool and it brought it back up a notch for me. I felt by linking the blood on the mirror back was a nice little touch.
7.2/10
In yo Ear:
Hmm I hate the rhyme scheme straight up. I tried to get use to it or even tolerate it, I struggled. You had a lot of emotional anger which is cool, I liked the venting but it didn’t go any where, it was just pure emotion and that’s it. All round it was an OK piece I just think you could of added a bit more to it.
4.7/10
Vote = A.S.K
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