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beechu:
You needed to punctuate that intro dude it killed me to read it. After that I was waiting for something to jump out at me but I never really got there it just dragged on.
Sorry bud but this isn’t up there for me.
4.5/10
Ana:
I always have loved everything you’ve dropped, you are one of my favourite writers on here. Top 10. This piece was no exception flow started of great and then dropped to good but the details in the story where amazing all the way through. But what I really enjoyed about this piece was the brilliant end. I love it your getting more twisted as the days go on.
8.2/10
Vote = anaphora
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