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Kaybi:
Some of your lines I felt had a certain power behind them, though rhyme wise they weren’t the strongest, it still had a lot of deep emotion coming off them that made it enjoyable. Flow ok to me, some lines where drawn out which made it seem like poetry but in the end I felt that worked for you. All up a good piece but nothing out of the ordinary.
6.6/10
Mr.Skull:
I’ll tell you what at first I was real iffy on your style of writing but I felt you definitely made it your own by doing that, so keep it up. Story was ok it slowly released little bits of info on the homeless guys life, I would have really liked to have seen this longer though. Just some more dark details about his hope breaking and his view on life as an addict, but still a cool piece.
Oh I love the last line – what can you offer me?
7.1/10
Vote – Mr.Skull
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