[Anaphora]

Atheist: Personifying the human race eh... a bit of a wide goal to emcompass, and for not feeling like giving your all to writing you did a fucking good ass job. The verse was a bit misleading, which is good in this case, because it never goes off topic... flow was fucking nice as shit, really was diggin the flow, wound up nicely, a solid verse...

Yung: Your lines were a little bit stretched here... I thought they were at least... not so much in their length alone, because inner rhymes save long lines, but there weren't any really, and some f the wording made you pause for a sec in the middle of a line... some of the phrasing was a little weird like "try to get this harassment thing out" just didn't make much sense on it's own... and a phrase/line should be able to stand alone and be decipherable.... and some of this just wasn't believable... no insight given to why not only did this guy kill his dad (that's understandable) but then chop him up and bury the pieces in dif places... cuz what he did would be considered self defense, plus, the realization that he just murdered someone, his own dad at that, would stop the adrenaline right there... I dunno, I guess I just didn't buy this piece very much ya know? Then the long lines... not enough to top Atheist here.

Vote: Atheist